Eddsworld
You're obviously a big fan of eddsworld, and you're quite irritatingly copying his ideas and settings and that makes this movie not better because if you compare this to eddsworld's halloween special, it's many things that needs fixing. Better art, more fluid animation, and better sounds. And you need a higher tempo (framerate), it gets boring after sometime. Other than that it's quite nice and you're on the right tracks. Keep on making attempts! :) There's nothing really wrong with copying from a great artist, you learn a lot from that.
Buy a wacom, good luck boy.